List Of Things I Need To Do To Improve My Summary

Improvements To Be Made

The documentary I have chosen to summarize is the 2014 film, directed and produced by Todd Douglas, Dinosaur 13. While my paper is nearing the end of it's due date I feel very confident I will be able to score high, however there are still a couple more tweaks I feel I can do that will improve my summary even more. I feel like the majority of my grammar and punctuation in the paper is correct, I still need to get a few more peoples outside opinions so that I may receive adequate feedback. A example of where I would need some feedback on punctuation is in my opening paragraph when I write, "At first glance the film looks as though it would be about the fossil discovery of one of the world's largest known land carnivores..." In this sentence, the feedback I would need is whether or not, "At first glance the film looks as though..." would need a comma after "glance". The next thing I really need to look over is making sure that my paper and all direct quotes from the documentary are in their proper MLA format. That being said, even though I trust easybib.com, I also need to go back through my Works Cited page and confirm that has been completed correctly. After doing these minor adjustments, I feel as though my paper will be in its finalized state and will be ready to be handed in.